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| MacGyver Online Forums > Virtual Seasons > Virtual Season 9.7: Life and the Grave |
| Posted by: MacsJeep 30 January 2018 - 12:20 PM |
| It's time for the first VS story from our great new writer, Sanguine! http://macgyver.tv/s2/grave/grave1.htm |
| Posted by: MacsMinx 4 February 2018 - 01:13 PM |
| Ooooh!....I'm intrigued. |
| Posted by: MacsJeep 7 February 2018 - 09:24 AM |
| Sorry I'm late with this! My boiler is broken and I was trying to sort it! http://macgyver.tv/s2/grave/grave2.htm |
| Posted by: uniquelyjas 7 February 2018 - 10:11 AM |
I LOVE this so far!! Great story and awesome writing...very descriptive with wonderful dialogue. I can see and hear it in my head (hope that's not a bad thing!). Favorite part in part one was when Mac got distracted by the blonde twins;) I was suspicious of Nick in part one, but not so much now after seeing how scared he got in part two...but I'll still keep my eye on him! You capture Mac really well. Yes! Duct Tape and SAK...that's all you need!! Well done so far!!!   |
| Posted by: Dragondog 7 February 2018 - 02:21 PM |
Mac's joke... LOL.  Didn't Nicolas Cage do that in National Treasure?Can't wait for part three! |
| Posted by: uniquelyjas 7 February 2018 - 03:14 PM | ||
Oh yeah...I meant to mention that! It was great! |
| Posted by: Sanguine 7 February 2018 - 03:23 PM | ||
Yes, he did.  I couldn't resist. Rule #1: Always go for the cheap babyface pop. Thank you so much, guys! Delighted that you like it so far. |
| Posted by: MacsJeep 13 February 2018 - 09:42 AM |
Its update time!  http://macgyver.tv/s2/grave/grave3.htm |
| Posted by: uniquelyjas 13 February 2018 - 10:28 AM |
| Yay! An update!! So, I was eating my lunch when I read about Terrance's neck bone poking through the flesh! Ewww! Love the booby traps...very suspenseful. Poor Nick, he's not handling this well at all! Nice touch adding the young man...puts a new spin on things. Good cliffhanger...waiting for more!! |
| Posted by: Dragondog 13 February 2018 - 06:42 PM |
| Yay! Sanguine, you write awesome fanfiction (I'll admit, my saying that was overdue). Can't wait for the conclusion! |
| Posted by: MacsJeep 20 February 2018 - 09:45 AM |
And here it is, the final part!  http://macgyver.tv/s2/grave/grave4.htm |
| Posted by: uniquelyjas 20 February 2018 - 10:53 AM |
| Whew! Glad to see everyone got out alive!! I really liked Mac's positive attitude about their 50/50 chance with the two doors. Sounds just like him! Also like the way you circled back to "sand is the key" and the interpretations. And a happy ending for the artifacts in true MacGyver style. Loved the ending...Nah, there aren't any curses:) Great job!! Looking forward to the next one:))) |
| Posted by: Dragondog 20 February 2018 - 06:44 PM |
That ending was fitting!  Great job! |