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Posted: 24 March 2008 - 06:42 AM                                    
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For the second time achieved due set back of the message counter, I'll post the third chapter for my 1500th message. MacGyver has taken Pete to the hospital where he will be treated for his wounds. But they're not the only ones around in the hospital.
This chapter is rated R for language and intense violence.

(We fade in with an exterior shot of the hospital and tense music on the background)
Chapter Three
Chaos at the Hospital
Fight to the Death


MacGyver arrived at the Memorial Hospital and stopped the car in front of the entrance.
‘Come on, Pete. Stay with me. We’re at the hospital. I’ll go get you a doctor.’ (The music fades away here) MacGyver ran into the hospital. It was pretty hectic in there. Doctors, nurses and specialists were running from patient to patient. They were clearly understaffed and something big must’ve happened. Some people mumbled something about a train crash and hundreds were wounded and more got killed.
MacGyver stopped a young male nurse. ‘Hey, you a doctor? I need a doctor.’
‘Sorry, buddy, I can’t help you now.’
He tried to stop another person.
‘Hey, my friend needs a doctor, he’s bleeding to death.’
‘Sorry, pal. Find someone else.’
‘Someone else?’ MacGyver mumbled desperate.
With his hands he went through his hair, he began wondering if he could get Pete a doctor in time. Last attempt to hold down a doctor or a nurse. He held down a female doctor who was pushing a wheelchair with a ten year old girl in it.
‘Hey, are you a doctor?’
‘Yes, I am.’
‘Good, I want you to come with me, my friend needs a doctor.’
‘Sorry, sir. But children’s lives are at stake here. I’ll come to you as soon as I can,’ she said and walked away.
‘Pete’s life’s at stake as well,’ he said but she didn’t listen anymore. ‘Oh, God!’
MacGyver ran back outside to the car. He noticed that in front of the entrance there was a sort of a small construction site. Probably for a flower lawn. There was a big pile of sand and dirt, which give him an idea and went back in the car.
‘Don’t worry, Pete. I’ll get you a doctor,’ he said and drove around the pile.
He stopped his car in front of the pile. The idea was to drive over the pile of sand and through the entrance doors. Now that would drag a lot of attention and than they would be all too glad to help him out.
‘Just you hang in there, Pete,’ he said and began revving the car.
The engine roared loudly a few times and than MacGyver pushed the gas pedal.
(Now we hear the music where in MacGyver drives the truck of the hill in Obsessed) The car took off and rode with a lot of speed over the pile of sand. The car flew in the air and landed several yards behind the pile of sand, making all sparks with the tires. MacGyver accelerated a little more and drove with car and everything through the big glass doors of the hospital and stopped in front of the reception. Angry he got out of the car and screamed: ‘I need a f*cking doctor, right now!’ (The music fades away here) Everybody was shocked or panicked of what he did to drag attention.
‘Alright, somebody help him out,’ someone said.
A few paramedics arrived with a stretcher.
‘Come on, hurry up,’ MacGyver said and opened Pete’s door. ‘He’s badly wounded.’
He took of Pete’s seatbelt and with the help of a few male nurses, they got Pete on the stretcher and took him off.
Pete was hardly out of sight or two security guards jumped on top of MacGyver.
‘Hey!’
MacGyver pushed them away. ‘Watch it!’
They tried to arrest him but MacGyver resisted with all he had. Than a familiar face came to MacGyver.
‘It’s alright, let him go,’ the person said.
‘Alright? But he drove through the entrance with his goddamn car,’ one guard said.
‘I know that, but I’m sure the Phoenix Foundation will pay for the damages. Isn’t that right, MacGyver?’
‘That’s right,’ MacGyver said while straightening his collars and jacket.’
‘You can go now,’ the person said dismissing the guards.
The guards left.
‘Thanks, Dr. Darnell.’
‘MacGyver. That was quite a show you pulled.’
‘Yeah. But Pete’s been badly injured.’
‘OK, we’ll talk about this but park your car outside first instead on the inside.’
‘Yeah, sure.’
‘You know where to find me, huh?’
‘Fifth floor on the intensive car. I gotcha.’

After MacGyver parked his car outside again, he went to the fifth floor and knocked on Dr. Darnell’s office door.
‘Come in.’
MacGyver entered the office. There was a third person there.
‘MacGyver, sit down,’ he said. ‘I think you know, Lt. Rhome, don’t you?’
‘Yeah, I do. We solved a few cases together,’ MacGyver said giving Rhome a hand before sitting down. ‘How are you doing?’
‘Fine,’ Rhome said.
‘Now, MacGyver. Explain Rhome and me here why in God’s name you drove through my glass entrance with your car.’
‘Alright, look. Earlier tonight I received a lead I had to check out which would’ve had to do with my next assignment for Phoenix, right? It led me to a single house at a deserted road. I checked it out and all I found there were two old dead peoples. They were both holding crucifixes. It was a creepy house, like a haunted hill house or something.’
MacGyver paused a moment before continuing.
‘The house was boarded up and everything in there seemed to come out the 1930’s. The furniture, the decorations, everything. I even found an original 1937 newspaper with the crash of the Hindenburg on the headlines. The only living thing there was a black cat.’
‘So you didn’t find anything there,’ Rhome said. ‘Then what?’
‘I heard noises.’
‘Noises?’ Darnell asked.
‘Yeah, like thuds and things falling over. It was really creepy.’
‘So there was another person around?’ Rhome asked.
‘Yeah.’
‘Who?’
‘I think it was Murdoc.’
‘Murdoc?’
‘Yeah. He’s been after us for the past twenty-five years. How he survives everything, is a riddle to me. He’s been demolished, blown up, fell in abysses, mineshafts, drowned, drove into ravines. The body is never found.’
‘What makes you so sure it is Murdoc?’
‘Because he just tried to ride me off the road. Murdoc injured Pete. He probably injured him to get to me. He knows, I can’t stand the fact of innocents being hurt in cross fires. Imagining him taking on a old blind and innocent man disgusts me.’
‘They’re easier to get.’
‘That Murdoc has fell so low in his targets must mean he has no honor at all. It’s like he’s trying to get ours.’
‘So what happened than?’ Darnell asked again.
‘I followed the noises and was lured into a trap in the basement. The basement looked like a torture room so I don’t exactly know what the activities of the inhabitants were. I was locked up with a bomb, so the house had to be blown up. I disarmed the bomb and used the C-4 to get out of there.’
Another pause.
‘I drove back to the Phoenix Foundation to ask Pete what it was all about but he never gave me a clear answer. So Murdoc probably had him under pressure. It had to be because when I was back home, Helene, Pete’s secretary called in panic that Pete was taken away by someone.’
‘Taken to where?’ Rhome wanted to know.
‘Guess.’
‘The house?’
‘Close. But that was my hunch as well. I drove back to the house as well but he wasn’t in the house.’
‘Than, where was he?’
‘Behind the house is a field and behind the field are woods. There were tire marks leading to the woods and the caves there.’
‘Caves?’ Darnell wondered.
‘Yeah. I went in the caves to look for Pete. I heard him calling for help and than I found him under all that blood. So I carried him back to the car and drove this way.’
‘And on your way here, you’ve seen Murdoc?’ Rhome asked while taking notes.
‘Yeah.’
‘How did you get rid of him?
‘Well, I… uh… I threw my fire extinguisher in his windshield.’
‘That was clever of you,’ Darnell said.
‘Yeah, but this guy is not finished yet. I wouldn’t be surprised if he would’ve followed me all the way down here. If you want some advice, doc: upgrade the security around perimeter. Murdoc is still out there and he might strike again soon.’
‘Well, I do it right away,’ he said.
‘That’s some story, MacGyver.’ Rhome said.
‘Tell me about it. It’s been one crazy night.’
‘What do you plan on doing now?’
MacGyver sighed. ‘I don’t know. I think I better stick around until Pete gets back out of surgery. I can’t leave him alone now and I gotta notify his family too.’
‘Than this will be all for now,’ Rhome said. ‘You can go.’
‘Thanks,’ MacGyver said while getting up and left the office.
MacGyver walked up and down the hallway for a while rubbing his hands over his face and leaning against the wall. He looked at his right and noticed the coffee machine in the corner. That would be welcome now after a night like this. He walked up to the coffee machine and paid for a cup. The coffee was hot and strong.
Though not allowed, he called Michael Thornton with his cell phone.
‘Michael? It’s Mac, here.’
‘MacGyver? Why are you calling me out of bed? Do you know what time it is?’
‘I’m sorry for calling you up. But something has happened with your father.’
‘What? What’s wrong with dad?’
‘He’s laying in the hospital, he’s badly wounded.’
‘I’m coming over right away. Which hospital is it?’
‘The Memorial.’
‘OK, I’ll be right there.’
‘Check.’

Twenty minutes later Michael and Connie Thornton arrived on the fifth floor with Nikki Carpenter. MacGyver saw them coming.
‘MacGyver,’ Nikki said.
‘Where’s dad?’
‘Is he alright?’ Connie asked.
‘He’s in surgery now,’ MacGyver said and hugged Connie. ‘He’s been in surgery for the past hour now. I don’t know much more for now.’
‘What happened?’ Michael asked.
‘I think we better talk in the waiting room.’
They all went to the waiting room and sat down.
‘So what’s going on?’ Nikki asked.
‘OK,’ MacGyver said, ‘earlier tonight, Pete send me out to meet someone, who had to do something with my next assignment. The place of the meeting was a boarded shut old house with the only living thing there, a black cat. The previous occupants of the house were dead in their bed with crucifixes in their hands. In the end it turned out to be a setup to kill me.’
‘Who wants to kill you?’ Connie asked.
‘Murdoc,’ MacGyver answered while looking at Nikki.
‘Murdoc?’ she asked.
‘Yeah. Our not normal professional killer.’
‘The guy who always comes back from the dead?’ Michael asked.
‘That’s him.’
‘Dad’s been after him since the late sixties when he was still working for the DXS.’
‘That’s right. After I met him, Murdoc was gone for seven years and than he showed up every now and than. Murdoc lured me into a trap from which I escaped. When I asked Pete for an explanation it was like he didn’t want to help me out, which means Murdoc was using Pete to get to me.’
‘Oh, my God,’ Connie said.
‘Michael, didn’t you ever noticed something strange about your father lately?’
‘I don’t know. I haven’t seen him over a week.’
‘Anyway, we came to an agreement to look into the situation first thing in the morning. I was hardly home for an hour or so sleeping when Helene called me up. She said Pete was taken away by someone.’
‘By Murdoc,’ Michael said.
‘And he was brought to the house, right?’ Nikki asked.
‘No. To the woods behind the house. There was a field and than a forest. I found him in the caves there, injured.’
‘Caves?’ Connie asked shocked.
‘Yeah. To be a honest it was one hell of a night. I carried him to the car and drove this way with Murdoc on my tail. He tried to run me of the road but I ran him off the road instead.’
‘How?’ Michael asked.
‘By throwing my fire extinguisher in his windshield.’
‘Clever.’
‘That’s what Dr. Darnell said too.’
‘So, what do we do now?’ Nikki asked.
‘The best thing we can do now for Pete, is to be here for him. He needs us more than ever.’
‘I agree and than what?’
‘Pete’s here and he’s safe here. Dr. Darnell said he would upgrade security. Murdoc is still out there and we haven’t seen the last of him yet. So we have to keep our guards up.’
‘You think, he might still show up tonight?’
‘I’m afraid so. The only thing we can really do now is wait. Wait for Pete to come out and wait for dawn.’

Another twenty minutes passed slowly. MacGyver came back from the coffee machine again and saw that Connie fell a sleep under Michael’s coat. Michael was dozing off with moments while trying to read a magazine. MacGyver and Nikki were the only ones who were fully awake. Nikki was standing in front of the window looking at darkened city.
‘Here,’ MacGyver said, giving her the cup of coffee.
‘Thanks,’ she said.
‘Welcome,’ MacGyver mumbled.
‘How are you holding up?’ she asked.
MacGyver lifted up his shoulders. ‘I just wish this night was over.’
‘Yeah, so do I,’ she said looking at her coffee before taking a sip.
‘And you?’
‘Time’s going slow if you have to wait. How bad was it when you found Pete?’
‘I can only hope I was on time.’
‘You always are.’
‘He’s been in there for more than an hour now.’
‘No news, good news, right?’
‘I hope so. Man, if I get my hands on Murdoc…’
‘Hey, relax. Pete’s going to make it.’
‘For once it’s not me but Pete in the hospital.’
‘Yeah. It’s good that didn’t happen too much. You’re always the one getting in troubles.’
‘Usually it’s the troubles getting into me. That’s the risk in our line of work.’
‘True,’ she said while taking another sip. ‘How’s Michael doing?’
MacGyver looked at Michael who now did sleep over the magazine.
‘I don’t know. I don’t know how well his relationship with his father became over the last fifteen, sixteen years. When one of Pete’s former friends took Michael and Connie hostage about twenty years ago in Louisiana over a failed assignment in Yemen, it came to my understanding, Michael didn’t really cared about his father for him not being home when he was needed. But in the end, they got along. Michael was still very young that time, hardly in his twenties.’
‘Michael’s been in jail too, is that right?’ she asked.
‘Yeah. There was a moment Michael lost his vision over right and wrong. He betrayed his father and the Phoenix Foundation by selling classified information. He was pretty new and inexperienced at that time but by helping us out catching those guys they reduced his sentence. Though he had to serve some time. Afterwards he began working for the Foundation again to make it up to his father. They have met regularly over the years but lately… I don’t know. The fact he’s here means a lot.’
‘What about Connie?’
‘Pete and Connie divorced about thirty-four years ago but they’ve always been friends after that. You know that Pete’s a workaholic and she couldn’t stand it that Pete always had to work all the time, that caused their divorce. The Phoenix Foundation was too much for her. But they’ve always cared about each other. Pete saved her from his enemies and she supported him when he had his eye operation. When Pete was about to be operated she had her own travel agency, which I assume still exists on this day.’
‘That’s uh… that’s some history, MacGyver.’
‘Yeah, our history together with Murdoc is about the same size. This all began when I tried to keep Jack’s taxi service in business. If he didn’t break his legs that time, I probably never met Pete or Murdoc.’
‘Or, I, you.’
MacGyver looked at Nikki when she said that. For the first time in their years of collaboration he saw more than just respect and friendship in her eyes.
Doctor Darnell than entered the waiting room.
‘The doctor’s there,’ she said.
‘MacGyver?’ he said.
‘Hey, mom, the doctor’s here,’ Michael said waking up his mother.
Connie woke up, placing the coat more tightly over her shoulders.
‘Well?’ MacGyver said.
‘How is he?’ Connie asked.
‘I just spoke to his doctor,’ doctor Darnell said.
‘And?’ Michael asked.
‘I’m sorry. It’s out of our hands now.’
‘Oh, my God!’ MacGyver exclaimed.
‘God, no!’ Connie said and started crying against Michael’s shoulder.
‘But what’s the diagnose, than?’ Nikki almost demanded.
‘Pete, lost a lot of blood. It was a surprise, even to us, that he didn’t bled to death.’
‘We have to thank MacGyver for that,’ Michael said.
‘Yeah, well. Pete’s injuries were pretty bad and very deep. We were able to fix them up but not entirely because of the fluids that developed within. All we can do now is wait till he pulls through. If he pulls through.’
‘Can we see him?’ MacGyver asked.
‘Sure. Follow me.’
MacGyver, Nikki, Michael, Connie and the joined in Lt. Rhome followed Dr. Darnell to a dark room where Pete was laying. He was laying at a heart monitor and a nurse was controlling his I.V.
‘You can take your time. He’s asleep and unaware of your presences.’
They all got around Pete’s bed.
‘Pete,’ MacGyver said. ‘Don’t worry, buddy. I’m right here with you.’
‘We’re all here,’ Nikki said taking Pete’s hand and laying her other on MacGyver’s shoulder.
‘Dad, if you can here me,’ Michael said. ‘I love you and so does, mom.’
‘Peter, I’m sorry our marriage has failed, but I always cared about you. Don’t you worry about nothing. It’ll be okay.’
For a moment, there was no sound in the room except the beeping sound of the heart monitor.

In the meantime Murdoc was snooping around the hospital area. He smiled when he saw MacGyver’s car on the hospital parking and the damage he caused at the hospital entrance. He wanted MacGyver outside to fight it out but he didn’t want to go in the hospital himself. With a binoculars he searched down the area and saw the pile of sand.
‘Hmm,’ he said and got an idea on how he would get MacGyver out. (The track Welcome to the Party from Die Hard starts playing now) He drove around to the pile of sand and put the car in reverse until he was far enough. Than he began revving his car and took off with increasing speed. Just like MacGyver did before he drove over the pile of sand sending his car in the air. But instead of driving through the entrance doors he rammed MacGyver’s Jeep on the back bumper causing a big dent. Murdoc drove backwards again and rammed the Jeep a second time.
Murdoc stormed out of his car with an M60 and started to shoot around in the air.
‘MACGYVER!!! HEY, MACGYVER!!!’
Murdoc sure dragged a lot of attention. The medics in the ambulances around the parking lot came to see what was going on and also the staff from ground level came to see what was going on.
‘What are you doing?’ someone asked.
Murdoc shot him in reply and shot back in the air to call for MacGyver.
‘MACGYVER!!!’
MacGyver appeared in front of the window on the fifth floor. They saw each other.
‘Murdoc!’ he said.
‘What?’ Nikki asked and she looked out of the window herself.
Without saying anything else MacGyver ran out of the room.
‘MacGyver, wait!’ Michael said and ran after him.
Also Lt. Rhome ran after him.
MacGyver ran to stairwell and spurted down the stairs as fast as he could. He pushed the door of the stairwell on ground level open, knocking a doctor to the floor. Everybody was still busy their taking care of the patients of the train crash.
When Murdoc saw MacGyver in there he began shooting in the entrance. Everybody inside ducked for cover. MacGyver jumped behind the reception desk. Than the shooting stopped. (The music stops here) There was a moment everything was silent.
‘MacGyver! Come on out!’
‘I think you better go out and see what he wants,’ a young male nurse said. (The track Escape or Fight from the game Fahrenheit Indigo Prophecy starts playing) MacGyver thought for a moment, got up and in slow motion he runs to Murdoc. Murdoc deliberately didn’t shoot. He wanted to fight him and that’s what they did. MacGyver tackled Murdoc when he was about to hit him with the M60. Murdoc fell on his back and MacGyver crawled on top of him, hitting him three times in the face and started to choke him with the M60. Growling Murdoc pushed MacGyver of him and a pulling game started to get control over the weapon. Both men didn’t want to let go of the gun and with their last pull the gun fell out of reach behind Murdoc’s pick-up truck.
They were standing over each other now.
‘Alright, Murdoc, now it’s between you and me.’
‘At last,’ Murdoc said and took out his trusty knife.
‘Again with the knife?’
‘It’s a good knife. It murdered a lot of peoples. Above all, this is what I used on Pete.’
This angered MacGyver and he attacked Murdoc. Murdoc swung his knife and MacGyver ducked. When the knife came back for the second time, MacGyver grabbed the wrist and hit Murdoc in his face. His knee went to Murdoc’s chest sending him backwards. Murdoc just laughed at him and now he attacked MacGyver but MacGyver grabbed the arm and pulled Murdoc over his head. Murdoc landed on his back but before he could get up, MacGyver grabbed his shoulder making him to get up and jumped on his back. He tried to get MacGyver of his back by running backwards and smacking him with his back against the pick-up truck. MacGyver placed a lot of more pressure on his arm he had wrapped around Murdoc’s throat. Murdoc squashed MacGyver again against the pick-up and rammed his elbow in his stomach.
‘Oh!’ MacGyver exclaimed.
With the back of his fist, Murdoc hit MacGyver in the nose. MacGyver had to let go and got another left fist to his cheek. He went down to the ground. His nose was bleeding and saw Murdoc taunting him. ‘Come on, MacGyver. I haven’t got all day.’
MacGyver got up and brutally pushed Murdoc against the car ramming his right fist in his stomach as hard as he could. Than he hit his chin with a right uppercut. Murdoc’s tongue got caught between his teeth and blood flew around. MacGyver growled when he launched his left fist against Murdoc’s mouth corner. Now Murdoc went down. His tongue was going around in his mouth and felt something that was supposed be stuck. He spat out two of his teeth. MacGyver knocked out two of his teeth with one single punch. A left one, that is. MacGyver grabbed Murdoc’s belt and his collar and with a 180 degree turn he bangs his head against the car. He forces him then on the hood as if he would arrest him but he bangs his head again on the hood twice, pulls him backwards and throws him with his head through the window. Murdoc remained motionless for a moment. That was quite a beating he took. MacGyver sure kicked his ass.
‘Had enough?’ he asked.
‘Not quite, MacGyver!’ he said and rammed his feet backwards in MacGyver stomach. MacGyver was send backwards but didn’t fell over. Murdoc got from out of the window seemingly unshaken but he was wounded from the broken glass. There was blood running down his face on both sides and from out of his mouth. Murdoc hits MacGyver now with both fists and kicks him down.
‘It’s your time to die, MacGyver!’ he said while MacGyver was getting up.
Than something horrible happened. Murdoc swung his knife from down to up in MacGyver’s face. The tip of the knife caused the bleeding, but while going up the knife cut his right eye as well. MacGyver felt backwards with half of his face bleeding and cries out in pain.
Michael saw that happening when he was in the entrance and took off his jacket and his tie. With the steel pole of an I.V. he ran outside joining into the fight.
Lt. Rhome was outside now too and called for backup.
Michael swung the steel pole around and hit him right on his head.
‘Aagh!!!’
Murdoc fell immediately on the ground and Michael hit him three more times on his back. He kicked his face than. Murdoc rolled over but when Michael was coming closer, he quickly stabbed him in his foot. Michael screamed in pain. He pulled the knife out and was about to attack Murdoc again. Murdoc had already extended his fist and hit Michael’s nose. Than he headbutts him, but Michael headbutts him back. Murdoc’s headbutt caused a bleeding above his eyebrow. Michael rams his fist in Murdoc’s chest. He kneed him in the groin, swung his left fist and a massive right in his face, making Murdoc fall over.
The police arrived on the parking lot. The crowd that was formed around the fighting men had to make some room for the police cars to get parked. The cops got out and aimed their guns on them. Murdoc saw that now the police had arrived everything going to ruins. In a last act of desperation he rolled underneath his car to get to his M60. He jumped on his loading ramp and started to fire around. Everybody ducked again, but the police fired back.
‘MACGYVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEERRRRRRRR!!!!!’
Murdoc tumbled backwards out of his loading ramp and than everything became silent. (The music stops here at a bang) It was like time had frozen there. Slowly life came back as Michael turned around to see how MacGyver was doing. MacGyver lied down with his face to the ground, his hands covering his eye. He was moaning in pain.
‘Aaarrrggghhh!!!’
‘MacGyver? Are you all right?’
‘Of course not,’ he said hoarse. ‘The son of a b*tch cut my eye.’
‘Here, put this against it,’ a medic said giving him bandages. ‘Man, you quickly need be taken care of, if you don’t wanna lose that eye.’
‘Yeah.’
MacGyver looked at where Murdoc was. He saw them taking him away. It was like it was finally done. Murdoc got killed in a confrontation with MacGyver and this time there was a body to identify for the FBI and the Interpol.
‘Lieutenant?’ MacGyver said.
‘Yeah.’
‘Just make sure they don’t lose that body out of sight.’
‘Don’t worry about it. We’ll keep it under guard twenty-four hours a day.’
‘You better,’ Michael said.
Painful and exhausted both men walked back in direction of the damaged entrance. MacGyver saw Nikki coming to him, her face saddened.
‘MacGyver, I…,’ she stopped halfway her sentence shocked on how MacGyver looked like. ‘MacGyver, what happened?’
‘Murdoc, nearly cut his eye out,’ Michael answered.
‘Can it be saved?’
‘Not if we keep chattering around here,’ MacGyver spat out but than he saw the tears on her face. ‘What’s wrong?’
‘It’s Pete. He…,’ she blocked again in her sentence but than found the courage to continue, ‘he didn’t make it.’ (Now we hear the music of the funeral scene in Trail to Doomsday)
‘What?’ MacGyver asked shocked.
‘He’s dead,’ Nikki sobbed. ‘I’m sorry.’
MacGyver and Michael shared a shocked look and than MacGyver took off back to the fifth floor, no matter the excruciating pain around his eye.
Back in Pete’s room, he saw Connie crying next to the bed. The sheets were pulled over Pete’s head.
‘No, Pete,’ MacGyver sobbed as he sat down on the chair on the other side of the bed.
With his hands in his face he cried. (The music fades away here) For a moment he stopped and suddenly felt angry. Extremely angry. Murdoc had succeeded. He killed Pete. Though now Murdoc got killed, they’re even. But Murdoc’s death didn’t make it up to Pete. And it didn’t feel like they were even.
MacGyver felt desperate and didn’t knew what to do and than he yelled it out.
‘The f*cking son of b*tch!!!’
He took the glass can of water and threw it against the wall.
Nikki, who just entered the room, could barely dodge the flying glass.
‘Murdoc, you motherf*cker!!!’
In his rage, MacGyver kicked his chair over and threw the table next to Pete’s bed to the ground as well.
Everybody was stunned of MacGyver’s reaction.
Heartbroken, MacGyver collapsed in the corner of the room when they took Pete’s body out of the room. It was deadly silent in the room.
MacGyver just sat there with his knees to his chest, defeated. Nikki came to him and sat beside him. She lay an arm around his shoulders.
‘It’s ok,’ she said.
(Now we hear the finale of The Challenge as MacGyver and Ray hug each other and when the music reaches it's peak we fade out here)



I think the poison that was used was applied to this knife, passed to the mutton when it was cut and then activated by the wine. - MacGyver.
Sometimes you just have to die a little inside to be reborn and rise again as a stronger and wiser version of you.
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ahhhh Pete surprise.gif . . . but atleast Murdoc is dead . . . or is he?!? lol really good story. clapping.gif



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Episode:Serenity, Passages, Humanity
Vehicle: Jeep
Jacket:  Black/Navy flight
House:  House boat



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I think the poison that was used was applied to this knife, passed to the mutton when it was cut and then activated by the wine. - MacGyver.
Sometimes you just have to die a little inside to be reborn and rise again as a stronger and wiser version of you.
It's better to be a little sad than to be fake content.

 
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