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I have honestly never written fan fiction before. In fact, I (almost) hated doing any type of
creative writing. But this was different. But since I am a beginner, I need to know what you
honestly think. here goes....
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MacGyver and Pete were leisurely strolling across a bridge one Monday, when suddenly
they heard a shriek and a splash. Alarmed, they ran to the area of the shriek. A hysterical
mother was crying,"My baby! My baby!Somebody help! she fell over the edge and she can't
swim!"
"Pete,"said MacGyver "stay here and calm her down." And with that, he leaped over the
edge and dove to the three year old's rescue. Looking around frantically underwater, he spotted
the child. Grabbing her by the back of her dress, MacGyver quickly surfaced. As he broke thru the
water, he heard cheers and clapping. He quickly swam to shore where many hands were ready to
pull him and the girl out of the water. A pair of strong, young hands were the ones that got to the girl
first. The teenager laid the child on the ground and said, "She's not breathing." Immediately, the
teenager began CPR, hoping to expel the water out of the girl's lungs.
After a couple of minutes had gone by, MacGyver knelt down and said,"Are you alright? Do you
need me to take over?" After he finished speaking, the child began to cough and sputter. In a few
moments her eyes were open and she asked,"Where's Mommy?"
"I'm here," gasped her mother running up with Pete not far behind. "How can I ever thank you?"
she asked looking up at MacGyver. "I don't know what would have happened if you hadn't been here."
"No thanks necessary, ma'm. I'm just glad I could help," said MacGyver with a small smile.
MacGyver, Pete, and the teenager quickly backed away to the give the mother and her
daughter some privacy. Now that the crisis was over, the crowd quickly dispersed. As the teenager
turned to go MacGyver said,"Hey, good job back there." With a smile and a blush the teenager turned
to go. It was then MacGyver and Pete got a good look at the adolescent. They noticed that the kid had
short, brown hair, was dirty, and had on blue jeans with holes and a green shirt on like the one MacGyver
was wearing. Pete nudged MacGyver,"Doesn't that face look familiar?" he said. " I know I've seen it
somewhere."
"Oh well, maybe you'll figure it out later," offer MacGyver as they turned to head back to the
Phoenix Foundation. " I feel like I've seen it too."
When they arrived at Pete's office, Pete went to turn on his computer. As he did, he noticed
a piece of paper on his desk. "MacGyver," he said with some urgency to his voice, "isn't this....... no
it can't be....."
"It can't be what?" asked MacGyver walking in Pete's direction.
" Isn't the the kid that did CPR back at the bridge? It says here that SHE is missing from an
orphan's home and they want us to find her." Pete looked up in amazement. "She looked like you,
MacGyver."
"Lemme see that. Whoa." breathed MacGyver as he sank into a chair. "That was her. I can't beleive it.
She looked like a boy. It says here she has been missing for six weeks. Now they want us to find her and she
turns up right in front of our faces and we didn't even recognize her."
TO BE CONTINUED....................
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