[The True MacGyver]

Mac stepped forward and rapped on the door ahead of them. Sam stood in solitude, keeping quiet. Mac stepped back and waited. Some scuffling sounded inside. It approached the door and MacGyver rested his arm on Sam’s shoulder. Sam looked uneasy. “An eccentric aunt? She’s not crazy is she?”

Mac thought for a moment and shook his head. Sam didn’t catch Mac’s sarcasm and had an anxious look on his face.

The door swung open with a creak and a woman appeared within. Her hair was short and hung around her face. Her eyes sparkled and her mouth dropped open. She stuck out her arms and stamped over to Sam. She threw her arms around him and inspected him. Sam looked at Mac over her shoulder and seemed to question him. Mac shrugged and waited. The woman took a step back and threw her arms around Mac.

He returned the embrace and asked “Penny! How’s it going?”

“Just great! So this is the legendary Sam, huh? He looks a lot like you! Well his room is in the back. There’s a cot and some old video tapes. You can watch them if you like. I hope you enjoy it here! Oh! Where are my manners? I’m Penny Parker, an old friend of your dad, here. We go back a long way. I first ran into him when I was traveling in Europe…”
“Framing a crime on me…” Mac added.
“You just won’t let that go, will ya?” Mac smiled and clapped Sam on the back. He looked at Mac and mouthed sarcastically “Eccentric?”
Mac chuckled and walked back down the corridor. Mac took the bike to the Phoenix Foundation. He needed new means of transportation. He pulled the bike into the vast garage across the street. Mac circled around the corners, each level descending deeper into darkness. Finally he stopped his downward spiral and viewed a tarped form. He looked at it like an old friend. He stowed the bike against the wall and gripped one end of the bright blue fabric. In one swift motion, he yanked the shroud off the mystery object and revealed an olive green body. His old jeep sat motionless, waiting to return for more adventures. He slid inside and felt the cold dashboard.

Just like I left it he thought, satisfied. He popped open the glove compartment and a crinkled, folded piece of paper tumbled to the seat. He curiously read it aloud.

“Well done, MacGyver, well done. It seems you’ve escaped my little trap. I do feel regretful about destroying such a beautiful car. But then again, that is how we feel about the ones close to us. Say hello to Samuel for me. Hopefully he can hear you. There is a train departing the nearest station at 1:30. The next incident will take place aboard. Be there, or fail the exams.”

Mac paused and pulled back his sleeve. “1:21” it read in tall numbers.

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[ghostdoll]

Wow! You're fast! And is coming pretty neat! Kuddos for you.
Still, I got nothing better to do with my life yet (actually I do, but I'm procastinating anyway)

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Mac stepped forward and rapped on the door ahead of them. Sam stood in solitude, keeping quiet. Mac stepped back and waited. Some scuffling sounded inside. It approached the door and MacGyver rested his arm on Sam’s shoulder. Sam looked uneasy.

“An eccentric aunt? She’s not crazy is she?”

Mac thought for a moment and shook his head. Sam didn’t catch Mac’s sarcasm and had an anxious look on his face.

The door swung open with a creak and a woman appeared within. Her hair was short and hung around her face. Her eyes sparkled and her mouth dropped open. She stuck out her arms and stamped over to Sam. She threw her arms around him and inspected him.

Sam looked at Mac over her shoulder and seemed to question him. Mac shrugged and waited. The woman took a step back and threw her arms around Mac.

He returned the embrace and asked, “Penny! How’s it going?”

“Just great! So this is the legendary Sam, huh? He looks a lot like you! Well his room is in the back. There’s a cot and some old video tapes. You can watch them if you like. I hope you enjoy it here! Oh! Where are my manners? I’m Penny Parker, an old friend of your dad, here. We go back a long way. I first ran into him when I was traveling in Europe…”

“Framing a crime on me…” Mac added.

“You just won’t let that go, will ya?”

Mac smiled and clapped Sam on the back.

He looked at Mac and mouthed sarcastically “Eccentric?”

Mac chuckled and walked back down the corridor. Mac took the bike to the Phoenix Foundation. He needed new means of transportation. He pulled the bike into the vast garage across the street. Mac circled around the corners, each level descending deeper into darkness.

Finally he stopped his downward spiral and viewed a tarped form. He looked at it like an old friend. He stowed the bike against the wall and gripped one end of the bright blue fabric. In one swift motion, he yanked the shroud off the mystery object and revealed an olive green body. His old jeep sat motionless, waiting to return for more adventures. He slid inside and felt the cold dashboard.

Just like I left it he thought, satisfied.

He popped open the glove compartment and a crinkled, folded piece of paper tumbled to the seat. He curiously read it aloud.

“Well done, MacGyver, well done. It seems you’ve escaped my little trap. I do feel regretful about destroying such a beautiful car. But then again, that is how we feel about the ones close to us. Say hello to Samuel for me. Hopefully he can hear you. There is a train departing the nearest station at 1:30. The next incident will take place aboard. Be there, or fail the exams.”

Mac paused and pulled back his sleeve.

“1:21” it read in tall numbers.

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Obviously a big 5.

I got a bit confussed, though... after Sam complains that Penny is "eccentric"... Mac laughs and then... he leaves back to the Phoenix Fooundation?? That's what happens?? I got lost there. Sorry

[The True MacGyver]

Mac leaves Penny's place and heads to the Phoenix Foundation Garage (using Sam's bike) and gets his jeep (which has been sitting there for years). He doesn't work there anymore, but Pete "looks the other way."