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ScreamingBansheila

Posted: 9 October 2008 - 05:04 AM

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I need help (As if you couldn't tell by the post title)

. I've finished the next part of my story Aveum Carmen, but, it doesn't feel right

. This is the first major story I've produced that others are actually reading and I'm not sure I have the characterization right. Does anyone know where I can recruit a beta-reader from, or is anyone willing to volunteer to be a beta reader for me?

Any volunteers will have my eternal gratitude.

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Liz1976

Posted: 9 October 2008 - 05:15 AM

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What do you need?

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ScreamingBansheila

Posted: 9 October 2008 - 05:24 AM

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Just someone I can send my story to before I post, so they can review it and tell me if anyone is majorly OOC. Sometimes I let myself influence the characters too much and I can never tell if their reaction to something is how I would react or how the character would react.

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Liz1976

Posted: 9 October 2008 - 12:58 PM

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Sure I'd be happy to read it.

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Posted: 9 October 2008 - 03:47 PM

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I like your story so far, since the original work I'm writing (a novel, not a fanfic) is about twins. I'm fascinated to see what you do with the twin theme in your story, about how Jack and Mac are separated and how that leads them to choose the paths they take. I'd be willing to volunteer my services as well, although you would have to be patient with me (I work during the week and don't have a lot of time then).

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ScreamingBansheila

Posted: 10 October 2008 - 03:02 AM

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Thanks for your help guys

I am really greatful for any help you guys can give me. Thanks

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MacsChick

Posted: 10 October 2008 - 01:24 PM

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You're welcome! Just send it to me whenever you are ready!

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