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Snow Part two
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Posted: 25 April 2009 - 12:32 PM                                    
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(Part two of one please tell me if i should change Cheyennes past or keep it the same i do not want Cheyenne to turn into a Mary-sue type char.)

MacGyver woke up feeling and smelling something close to him smelled of herbs mixed with something, he looked at Cheyenne which she was cooking something that smelled better then what was close to him. Cheyenne turned to him and smiled saying “Good morning sun shine.”
MacGyver grinned a bit as he asked “what is that smell?”
Cheyenne” Food what else.”
MacGyver” I meant that smell like herbs and something else mixed.”
Cheyenne” Oh, that’s a mix of herbs and something else that Medicine Wolf would not say.
He brought it over and placed it on your wounds he says you will heal faster.”
MacGyver” when did he come over?”
Cheyenne” he came last night while you was sleeping.”
MacGyver” oh.”
Cheyenne moved over to MacGyver sitting on the side of his bed and feed him his morning food. After eating, Cheyenne removed his bed covers and helped him up out of bed, yes he is where pants. After getting him to his feet she moved across the floor.
Cheyenne “You can lean on me if you need to MacGyver.”
He closed his eyes in deep pain holding his breath at times and almost screaming out in pain but he didn’t finally they made it to the door she then turned around and helped him back to his bed, gently laying him down back into his bed, and covering him back up. She then picked up a bucket and the dishs and headed out side where she went to clean them out.
Coming back inside her sees MacGyver sitting on the side of the bed running his hand through Snow’s white fur. Cheyenne smiles as she moves inside of the cabin.
Cheyenne” Feeling better I see.”
MacGyver looks up smiling weakly at Cheyenne “Ya,I figure I got to get up more even thou the pain is well, you know how pain is.”
Cheyenne” ya, I know all too well how much painful it is, been shot in the chest by my partner five times in the chest, they told me I was in a camba for five days.”
MacGyver looked up at Cheyenne his eyes show pain for Cheyenne “why did he do that for?”
Cheyenne places each dish in its place as she speaks “He betrayed me MacGyver all this time I found out he was married and had a kid he was protecting them from the Boss. The boss was going to kill his family if he didn’t betray me and shot me or try to kill me.”
MacGyver leaned up and layed back down the pain from his wounds was too much for him to bear any longer. “Who is the Boss?”
Cheyenne sits down in a chair close by as Snow lays at her feet.
Cheyenne” he was my step-dad, his the one who trained me in all I know. When I was little I was giving a drug called Lac’e it was to force me to kill after it didn’t work for such a long time he placed a chip in my head and after it fired one night when I was 16 years old I ran away. I don’t really like to talk about it very much …MacGyver, so please don’t ask about my past no more, I beg you.”
MacGyver nods asking something else.
MacGyver” so how did you meet Snow?”
Cheyenne” Snow came up to me while I was building the cabin one day, he was small and looked like he had no food, he had his mothers blood on him which meet his mother was killed.”



 
                                                                     
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