The fire bruned, and the light from it was all that spread up into the moonlight air, the darkness around them sunk over the woods. In the glow of the fire Lisa and MacGyver sit around no one speaking, just glaceing at one other, breathing in the warm summer air.
Finally MacGyver tossing in a piece of wood he said “So where was you going Lisa?”
Lisa bit her lower lip and looked away saying “Any where as long as I don’t have to be in that program.”
MacGyver nods pokeing the fire a little bit as he says” I’m sorry about your mother.”
Lisa looked at MacGyver for a few mintutes one can see the pain in her eyes as she says” I found my mother, she was lying there on the floor with her choice drink, she was pale, and her eyes was opened, I thought at first she was just acting but once I trying to get her up, she was cold. My father. (She looks away her hate could be seen in her face.) He pushed me away and started blimeing me for my mothers death. I wasn’t even allowed to go to her funeral because he thought that I killed her.”
MacGyver placed a hand on her shoulder saying “I’m sorry, your father shouldn’t have blimed you for her death, she had a problem and it killed her. I just don’t want to see you Lisa go down that path, that’s way I asked your father for you to join this program. It will take time for you to forgive your father.”
Lisa looked at MacGyver with tears in her eyes saying” you’re the only friend I have that cares.”
MacGyver moved over to Lisa and hugged her; Lisa hugged him back as tears rolled down her face.
MacGyver “In time you can make more friends just open your heart to them.”
Lisa moved back and smiled that old smile she used to have when MacGyver first meet him.
Lisa “So you’re going to take me back to the camp?”
MacGyver wipped away Lisa’s tears and said” No, camp by now has already moved, we just have to get back on the path where they are going and sooner or later we will meet them.”
Lisa nodded and started removeing her nose rings, tounge and brow rings, MacGyver lifted his brow but said nothing.
MacGyver” ok, now young lady hit the bed we have along ways to go tomarrow.”
Lisa” Yes Sir.”
So MacGyver and Lisa curl up into earth beds and go to sleep.

Great read, Beachbead, don't stop.
Keep writing.

thank you, will do

You need to focus on proof reading (spelling and grammar) and I would suggest maybe combining several of these very short chapters into one longer chapter. If you look at other stories in here, that chapters are at least a page in length. Having very short chapters like this makes the story too disjointed.. like having ad-brakes every 5 minutes on TV. A good story flows, and that can only happen if the chapters are of a reasonable length.

I'll make them longer..