ok here it is my new video hope eveyone likes it.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cLRxid31hWc

Good video

I'm not sure about the choice of song though... some of the lyrics fit quite well, but over all it just doesn't seem to quite feel right at times.

technically, the only thing I would suggest is fading both image and sound to black at the end of the video, instead of just cutting off, but those are little tricks you learn along the way and all in all this is a pretty good first video.

Great video just don''t like the song to it.

I know the song may not be the right. Does anyone have a way to get free music off line.

Getting music offline is as simple as importing a CD into itunes. But putting it up on youtube may trigger their copyright snoopers, depending on who owns the music.