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MacBeth
Posted: 11 January 2010 - 10:56 AM                                    
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Chapter 8 teaser:

They’d bound his wrists in front of him with heavy wire, not so tightly as to cut off the circulation; but he soon rubbed the skin raw trying to slip loose, in the rare moments when he wasn’t watched too closely even for that. The wire was too heavy and too tight to manage the repeated bending that would have allowed him to break it. It was too rigid to manage a release without tools, and he was repeatedly frustrated in his attempts to get hold of anything that he might be able to use.

The frustration rankled and burned in his mind, disturbing his sleep with nightmares of blind alleys and impassable canyon walls, and blood spreading in rivulets across the dry earth of the high mountains. They were headed north, and the jungle was growing thicker and more tangled even as the air grew thicker, damper, hotter. In the heat and sweat of the harsh days, Mac didn’t recognise the onset of fever; with his mind already hazy, he wasn’t sure when the infection first developed in the raw abrasions in his wrists. After that, the haziness grew worse as the pain overtook him. Xavier swore at him when he finally noticed.


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Chapter Eight: Dependent Clause

That's as far as posting has gone to date -- but the story is far from over!

Previous chapter links:

Chapter One: Present Imperfect
Chapter Two: Subjunctive
Chapter Three: Part Participle
Chapter Four: Elliptical Phrase
Chapter Five: Transitive
Chapter Six: Comma Splice
Chapter Seven: Intransitive



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Posted: 11 January 2010 - 11:01 AM                                    
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If I were not interested before, after reading this teaser, I'm riveted!!

You whump wonderfully! Not a drop of the gratuitous, and Mac in character every step of the way!

Refreshing! biggrin.gif



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Posted: 11 January 2010 - 11:12 AM                                    
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Posted: 12 January 2010 - 09:01 PM                                    
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Teasers!
I didn't know there were teasers!?
I love them!

The eighth chapter left me breathless. And I kept rubbing my wrists. Talk about expressive writing...






 
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Posted: 15 January 2010 - 05:56 PM                                    
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Thank you! *rubs wrists*

Since I'm now posting links, instead of reposting the entire story, I though it would be fun to do teaser excerpts -- kind of like trailers, or the excerpted paragraph they often place at the front of a book. It was fun picking them out. Especially Murdoc and the duct tape.



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Hey 'Beth!
Loving your story! (of course)
*Sends 'Beth a virtual fresh killed deer for all her hard work*
I have missed you and all the great authors here.

Keep up the great work! Cant wait to read the rest of the story!
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Posted: 17 January 2010 - 07:46 AM                                    
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Kyrian! It's great to see you again!! *hugs*

Mmm, venison. Guess I better keep on writing!



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